Remove compound constructions
- Sean O'Shea
- May 7, 2021
- 1 min read
Dianne Rosky of Rosky Legal Education recommends avoiding using the following compound constructions, and instead using single words which state points made in a brief more concisely. After cite checking a brief, search for the phrases listed on the left, and replace them with the words on the right. Attorneys will appreciate seeing these corrections in track changes, even if writing concisely does not come naturally to them. If they don't recall an English teacher's admonition to write succinctly, they will like getting help coming in under a court's word or page count limit.
at this/that point in time ------------------------------ now / then
in connection with ------------------------------ about / concerning
in order to ------------------------------ to
in the event that ------------------------------ if
in many instances/cases ------------------------------ often
in most instances/cases ------------------------------ usually
prior to ------------------------------ before
subsequent to ------------------------------ after
the fact that ------------------------------ that
due to the fact that ------------------------------ because
the situation where ------------------------------ where
the situation in which ------------------------------ where
the question whether ------------------------------ whether
with reference to ------------------------------ about / concerning